Comic

[Xflame]

Im makin a comic for fun during winterbreak you can see it here

plz no flames

www.freewebs.com/sandraysstory

[Plaque Man]

Hello Xflame,

I liked your comic very much. I have to tell yah as corney as it was it made me laugh outloud. :wink3: Only crit I have for you was the bubbles were a little hard to follow. Other then that though very creative. I know you weren't asking for a crit but I liked it so I thought I'd tell you the only problem I had with it. :toast: Nice work

[Xflame]

Hey thanks, i fixed the bubble problem by using numbers, just follow them

[Xflame]

Third part is done

[Plaque Man]

Nice work, I like the way the story is progressing. It is always a good time when you got a naked dark elf to look at. I like the way that you numbered the bubbles too BTW, makes it much easier to follow.
:toast:

[Bassant]

Strange....

[Niandralades]

I liked the bit where the site was frozen due to excess bandwidth

[Xflame]

Yeah youre right im going to fix it

[Xflame]

The new link is here

www.freewebs.com/sandray1

[Jinsai]

Very strange..

[Xflame]

come on, its just a hobby comic! lol

[Niandralades]

I can't wait for the next installment.

[Xflame]

Well the newxt installment is in now (18+)

[kzap]

heh nice :) more please